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Thursday 16 August 2012

Sausages Sizzle


  1. Yesterday Room 15 had a sausages sizzle which meant ,if we wanted to have a sausage then we  would have to bring a gold coin donation or we weren’t allowed a sausage. But Mr Mark said we were allowed one only if we payed him the next day. So we did end up having one but before we had one we and to make it so this was the first step.


We had to take turns cutting up the onions so we did. First we get an onion and then peeled it then we had to cut it in half. After that we had to start chopping it into semi ciucle and stick it onto the big green plate. But we couldn't just stick it stright onto the grill causes the sausages were cooking.



Finaly Mr Marks finshed cooking the sausage and that ment that he could stick the onions on the grill.  Once those onions were cook then we could eat our sausage sizzle. Just a few more  mintures and then we could eat them up.



Once the onions were fainly cook we had to stand in line and wait til we got to the table then we could get a bread. Then we go up to Mr Marks  and get an sausage amd some onions. Next we would go up to Aldora and Meleane so the can strick some tomtoe sauce on top of our sausage sizzle.



Now it’s time to eat our yummy sausage sizzle. Then we walked outside to the deck  and started to eat our nummy sausage. Once I took a bite all I could taste was a bit of  bunrt bit of the sausages. So I took another bite then I could taste the nice hot sausage so I eat it all up and went to take a drink then back to our school work “oh no” I said as I was walking back up the stairs.






2 comments:

Mr Chris Marks said...

Good to see that your planning has resulted in you having paragraphs that are about one main idea.

Just be careful what colour your writing is as some colours make it hard to read. Also please go through and edit as you have some wrong words in there which are probably wrong word check options.

aldorat said...

Hi Charlee,
great story there.
Next time you should Make your writing colour a little bit darker. by the way your writing is awesome.

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