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Wednesday 17 October 2012

My Writing Of The Rober


One cloudy day my cousin went to the shop to get some lollies.  Once she got to the Pt England shops there were a few  people there, and they were still inside their cars. Then she walked in and there was the shopkeeper looking around to see what everyone was doing.She saw us walk in and said “hello how are you today”, so my cousin said “good” back to her.

After she said  good this man with a black pair of jeans, black jumper, black hoodie and a beanie walked in the door. Then she looked at the shopkeeper looking like something bad was going to happenbut my cousin made, it look like she had no idea what was going on. Eventually he went to the counter and said “give me all your money”. Once she heard that then she knew that she had to do something. She should ring the police but she forgot that her phone was at home. What  was she going to do?


So she dashed out the door and ran to the next shop and asked them for a phone she could use. Then they asked why and she said, “because someone is robbing the dairy so can I use the phone like now PLEASE!!!!”. Eventually they let her use the phone and one moment she forgot the number but she finally remembered the number, so her finger quickly pushed 111 and someone picked up the phone and said Ambulance, Fire station or Police. She said “POLICE NOW”. So they asked why and she told them why and they quickly came to the Pt England Shops.


Once they got here then they got out of the car and said, “WHERE IS HE AND WE WILL CATCH HIM”. She said “He is still inside of the shop stealing the money from the shopkeeper”. They dashed into the shop and caught him and so they arrested him and put inside of jail for a very long time. The shopkeeper was  pleased that the Police got there in time so they could catch him so the shopkeeper said, “THANKYOU VERY MUCH LITTLE GIRL” so I said, YOU WELCOME SHOPKEEPER”, the she was off home.</b>

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