
The next day we jumped into the pool and then I looked around to see who was in my group. Once I saw Annliz, Aldora, Ana and Sarona I quickly ran to them and said “Hi” to them Annliz was like “are you in group Two” and I said “yeah”. But I wanted to be in group three with Laita, Grace, Hope and Ata. When I saw Auri, Lukis and Anthony I was like “oh no not them why can’t they be in group One”.
Then we had to line up in two lines and I was the first person in line and the first person in the other line was Lukis and we had to grab a flatter board and stick our hands at the top, of the flatter board and kick to the island without breathing. Gracefully kicking to the island without breathing I got to the end before Lukis and he wasn’t even half way.
At the end of the lesson we always have a breathing competition then we have to jump out. I was sad that we had to jump out. At lesson we get two more weeks of this fun.
2 comments:
Nice story Charlee. I like that you are using speech and words like gracefully to make your writing interesting and effective.
Just remember to be very careful with your sentence lengths.
Hi Mr Marks,
I've Got Your Comment And I Think That I Might Need To Work On The Length Of My Sentence Thanks For The Tips
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